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Post by chris on Dec 12, 2006 18:46:57 GMT -5
Please Tell Us What You Think.
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Post by Quester on Dec 15, 2006 6:18:37 GMT -5
The costumes on that cover are..........AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by >>Riz! on Dec 15, 2006 13:48:41 GMT -5
Thank you very much, but lets talk about the story  Didn't really grab me, but it was okay. I liked the Superman-"Lucifer was an archangel once"- analogy Otis' background story was really good. I liked it more than the rest of the issue. |
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Post by HoM on Dec 15, 2006 13:59:47 GMT -5
"Lucifer was an angel once"? Wasn't that a line from JLU?  |
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Post by timdrake on Dec 15, 2006 17:41:59 GMT -5
I wish I could have spent more time on the back up, or developing Otis' character, but that was an afterthought. I originally planned for him to have a smaller role, but the more I wrote, the more interested I was in him than the rest of the story. Unfortunately, I have the rest of the story completely plotted out and he only has small parts in the next couple issues. I have some stuff plotted out for a sequel, and he has one of the main roles.
I guess you already know who the main villain is, but I've been dropping some clues as to who caused this whole mess. Now that Keystone has settled down, they can start trying to figure out what exactly happened in the final 3 issues.
That's been used in a lot of things, I just wanted to show how a regular person (or in this case someone who is new to being a superhuman) views them by comparing the heroes to archangels. That Lucifer comparison is important though, in some way Conner has fallen, and next issue gets into his head to see what the catalyst for his change was and how he justifies his actions.
Thanks for the feedback
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Post by chaltab on Dec 26, 2006 22:29:59 GMT -5
Honestly, I didn't like this issue terribly well. The cover was great, but Conner and Cassie would never wantonly murder like that. It felt abruptly out of character--maybe you'll explain over the course of the story what's pushed Conner over the edge, but it seems off here.
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Post by timdrake on Dec 28, 2006 18:54:29 GMT -5
It may seem like Conner and Cassie don't care about how they're acting, but in the next issue (which is narrated by Conner), his reasons for acting this way are revealed and getting inside of his head shows that he isn't 100% sure if his actions are right or wrong. Keep in mind that, in this story, the Titans disbanded after the events of 'The Insiders'. After he was controlled by Luthor and forced to attack his friends, he had no one to talk to about it other than Cassie because they all split up. I don't want to reveal too much from the next issue, but he does have his reasons for acting this way, and he isn't completely evil.
Thanks for the feedback, and I hope you'll keep reading.
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