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Post by artteach on Jan 20, 2007 0:50:30 GMT -5
Tell us what you think.
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Post by arcalian on Jan 20, 2007 1:09:50 GMT -5
Was very frenetic, action packed and confusing in a Marvel sort of way.
*scratches head* I want to see more if only to find out what the heck that was all about.
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Post by sly_kat on Jan 21, 2007 4:07:33 GMT -5
Was very frenetic, action packed and confusing in a Marvel sort of way. *scratches head* I want to see more if only to find out what the heck that was all about. Thanks for reading  it was meant to be very crazyed, action packed and confusing... the issues to come will better explain everything, kinda like unraveling a mystery  |
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Post by Admin on Jan 31, 2007 10:46:44 GMT -5
I quite liked the energy of it all, and the large cast, even though there was a bit too much going on for me to take in. Also, it would have been easier to read if there were some blank lines between the paragraphs, and the rating system with its negative stars just confused me.
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Post by HoM on Feb 1, 2007 11:10:47 GMT -5
I noticed you like the word "Christened"... Heh. This was cool. Bit confusing because of the lack of spaces between dialogue, but as I read it, I hope y'all don't mind, I edited it to make it easier on the eyes. Lots going on, lots of mystery, and I shall pop my head in for next issue.
Doesn't this book deserve it's own forum though? If it's an ongoing, put it in a separate section, not at the bottom of the pile!
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Post by artteach on Feb 2, 2007 21:24:51 GMT -5
Did not have the ability to open sub boards. Now I have the ability, but need to figure out how it is done.
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Post by sly_kat on Feb 3, 2007 23:10:17 GMT -5
I quite liked the energy of it all, and the large cast, even though there was a bit too much going on for me to take in. Also, it would have been easier to read if there were some blank lines between the paragraphs, and the rating system with its negative stars just confused me. It'll slow down the pace, just sorta shooting it out there at first... when i sent it there were line breaks, iono could be word, who knows, thanks for reading:) |
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Post by sly_kat on Feb 3, 2007 23:10:59 GMT -5
I noticed you like the word "Christened"... Heh. This was cool. Bit confusing because of the lack of spaces between dialogue, but as I read it, I hope y'all don't mind, I edited it to make it easier on the eyes. Lots going on, lots of mystery, and I shall pop my head in for next issue. Doesn't this book deserve it's own forum though? If it's an ongoing, put it in a separate section, not at the bottom of the pile! Yeah thanks for reading its only gonna get better... i mean who wouldnt wanna see villains go nutz against one another? i mean it is war;) |
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Post by arcalian on Apr 25, 2007 20:25:38 GMT -5
Still not entirely sure what's going on. I thought Harley would be more upset about the Joker's death.
But what the old heroes said about wishing the younger ones lived.....that was so true it hurt.
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Post by sly_kat on Apr 26, 2007 0:22:16 GMT -5
Still not entirely sure what's going on. I thought Harley would be more upset about the Joker's death. But what the old heroes said about wishing the younger ones lived.....that was so true it hurt. yeah still working out the kinks, but more of Harley affected by the Joker's death will be explored in the next issue:) tried to keep it simple, luthor's funeral and then the villain's funeral for luthor' |
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it was meant to be very crazyed, action packed and confusing... the issues to come will better explain everything, kinda like unraveling a mystery 
