Mischief
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I Sit Upon My Throne As The Guardian & The Keeper Of The Lightning.
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Post by Mischief on Mar 23, 2009 17:40:14 GMT -5
Please let us know what you think!
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Post by UltimateDC on Mar 25, 2009 4:05:29 GMT -5
Interesting story idea. I didn't expect the series to follow the animated community that much, but it's an interesting basic idea have Man-Bat with Doomsday's powers. The telling, however, leaves something to be desired. The victim's backstories were good touches, but dialogue still needs to be tightened up at some ponts. Overall, the issue was solid. I'll be back next month.
-UDC
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Post by Ammunition88 on Mar 27, 2009 0:02:35 GMT -5
Thanks, as always, UDC, for your honesty. I'm not going to lie, I'm still getting the hang of this series, so I'm probably going to make more than a few mistakes early on, but, I plan to learn from everyone of them and improve myself.....
Glad you liked the Man-Bat idea. It's one that came to me one day while driving to pick up my week's worth of comics. I stopped, wrote down the general idea in my notebook and, well, here it is lol....
The more diverging elements of this series from the animated series will be coming a few issues down the road, just wait!
-Cam-
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Mischief
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I Sit Upon My Throne As The Guardian & The Keeper Of The Lightning.
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Post by Mischief on Mar 27, 2009 19:15:12 GMT -5
The ideas that this gentleman has for the future is mind-blowing. So stay tune for the next issue of Batman Beyond. This issue was special for me because it marked the return of KrystaleDragon as series editor. Welcome back, KD.
The future is now,
Mischief
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Post by krystaledragon on Mar 27, 2009 22:30:19 GMT -5
The ideas that this gentleman has for the future is mind-blowing. So stay tune for the next issue of Batman Beyond. This issue was special for me because it marked the return of KrystaleDragon as series editor. Welcome back, KD. The future is now, Mischief hmm what can I say to this other than thanks my love. It is wonderful to be working with you again my darling husband. EM I did enjoy editing the story and yes our dear writer like many others aren't perfect but that is alright. Writing is something that takes time, and to tell the truth I truly didn't find that much wrong with what he wrote. Yes things can be tightened up but again nothing was too major to stop the book from coming out in my mind. He can only get better. And like I say to everyone it takes a writer to know a writer, and to be a good writer it takes practice. That is what he is getting. Keep up the good work and we shall see the improvements down the line and yes Mischief and I will happily work with him and help him in any way he needs. Almost everyone here on the site knows that Mischief and I also have our own series so don't hesitate to ask either of us questions or anyone else on the site. *Sorry I am diverging from the subject.* Anyways good issue and I am happily working on the next issue. Keep up the good writing. The Krystale one. *PS Love you know what EM means it is what you want as your tat on your other arm plus what is already on your arm in case your confused. We all know that happens a time or two.* |
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Post by zirron on Mar 29, 2009 11:50:38 GMT -5
Story is good. Man-Bat is a fave of mine. So I thought you did a good job in explaining who and what he was. The editing of the codes in the middle of the story is very very bad... it's distracting to see the open codes because they've been typed in wrong. Whoever edited that part needs to go back and correct it b/c it's very distracting from the story... I like the premise of bringing in Amanda Waller into the mix. I think she's one of the often misunderstood characters but she's used effectively here. Good rebound, Cam. I liked this issue.  from me on on the story.  from me on the cover. I don't usually comment on the editing b/c people make gaffs here and there, but there were way too many and it took away from the writing.  from me on the editing of the story. Cya next month! |
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Post by krystaledragon on Mar 29, 2009 11:55:55 GMT -5
The editing of the codes in the middle of the story is very very bad... it's distracting to see the open codes because they've been typed in wrong. Whoever edited that part needs to go back and correct it b/c it's very distracting from the story... from me on on the story. from me on the cover. Cya next month! I am sorry I did it rather quickly. I shall have to beat the husband for hurrying me on the issue. don't worry I shall fix it thank you so much for bringing it to my attention though I do appreciate it. And I hope it shall not be that way for issue 6 and yes it is already being worked on. ;D KD |
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Post by krystaledragon on Mar 29, 2009 12:07:03 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Alrighty now all fixed up so there should be no bad coding now. I am soo sorry. [/glow]
I fixed it up for you all I hope you will all forgive me and no giving me 50 lashs for my errors.
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Post by Ammunition88 on Mar 31, 2009 0:07:16 GMT -5
Thanks to everyone who's followed this series so far and didn't ditch me after that last issue lol....
Chief, thanks for your support and excitement for the ideas I have planned!
Krystal, thanks for the encouragement!
Zirron, thanks for your honesty and I'm thrilled that you liked my handling of Waller. I was scared to death that I'd screw her up, but I'm glad to see someone liked it. Don't worry either, we'll be seeing more of Ms. Waller in the future!
thanks for reading, everyone!
-Cam-
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