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Post by HoM on Oct 5, 2005 11:36:56 GMT -5
Best bit was the ending!
Freaking fantastic cliff hanger, and it left me staring at the screen saying:
His WHAT?!
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Post by HoM on Oct 5, 2005 15:41:30 GMT -5
What did you lot think of this #0?
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Post by Apprentice on Oct 5, 2005 15:45:09 GMT -5
It was great...nice twist at the end.
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Post by Dylan (Clay) Clearbrook on Oct 5, 2005 15:45:15 GMT -5
Good. Very well done. It left me wanting to read on.
Nice job.
One question. I may have been out of the loop for some time....but I thought Jax-Ur was a male scientist.
Dylan Clearbrook
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Post by dragonbat on Oct 5, 2005 20:24:34 GMT -5
Well, I'm not normally a Supes fan... but I'm looking forward to having my mind changed!
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Post by Lantern Lad on Oct 6, 2005 0:55:30 GMT -5
Excellent work David! Truly a Superman story worth reading... and whatta cliff-hanger!
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Post by Brandon on Oct 6, 2005 7:10:27 GMT -5
Great story! You got right to it and threw two of Superman's biggest enemies at him right off. Can't wait to read more.
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Post by Admin on Oct 6, 2005 10:09:16 GMT -5
One question. I may have been out of the loop for some time....but I thought Jax-Ur was a male scientist. Exactly right, Dylan. Good catch! Faora is the daughter of Jax-Ur. In Kryptonian nomenclature, daughters take their fathers' whole name as their surname (thus Kara Zor-El, Faora Jax-Ur), at least until they're married. |
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Post by Dylan (Clay) Clearbrook on Oct 7, 2005 0:41:44 GMT -5
Exactly right, Dylan. Good catch! Faora is the daughter of Jax-Ur. In Kryptonian nomenclature, daughters take their fathers' whole name as their surname (thus Kara Zor-El, Faora Jax-Ur), at least until they're married. Since the only female I can remember from the PZ HAD no surname and was an extreme male hater, I have to assume that you grafted her linage to Jax-Ur's line. Not bad. ( ;D I am the LAST person that can say anything about taking artistic license when writing Fan-fiction ;D) Dylan |
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Post by starlord on Oct 7, 2005 9:22:05 GMT -5
Wow!!!!
This was a great read! You had me at hello!
Seriously though, Supes has never been my number one favorites, but it was really enjoyable. And I LOVE cliffhanger endings. So you had me from beginning to end. Good job.
StarLord
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Post by goldk on Oct 7, 2005 10:47:42 GMT -5
New guy here. I liked the story, a good mix of older stuff for us older fans and action and adventure to keep new fans interested. Nice intrigue with Luthor too. I like the twist at the end. WIll be interested to see where you take it.
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Post by darkknightdetec on Oct 7, 2005 21:17:08 GMT -5
Nice. Can't wait for next issue. Man, I love this site! It's like getting free comics!
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Post by Romans Empire on Oct 9, 2005 7:26:56 GMT -5
Wow David I must say I really enjoyed the first issue! Cliffhanger endings are the best. You really have set the bar high for all the stories that are to follow! ( I better polish up my proposal before I submit!)
John
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Post by Admin on Oct 11, 2005 23:57:23 GMT -5
Nice. Can't wait for next issue. Man, I love this site! It's like getting free comics! You just coined, in a nutshell, what the DC2 is all about. Thanks! |
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Post by alra121 on Oct 18, 2005 21:03:47 GMT -5
Love the issue, I am looking forward how this family reunion is going to play out. Should be interesting.
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Post by partystarter on Oct 18, 2005 21:06:41 GMT -5
I thought the issue was fabulous!
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Post by miracleman on Nov 17, 2005 10:18:07 GMT -5
Great first issue. The dialog was great and the characterizations were spot-on. It held my attention and I can't wait to read the next issue. Great job.
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Post by theredhood40 on Jan 20, 2006 0:40:14 GMT -5
another strange way of approaching a zero issue.
scenes of lois, clark and perry seem to be troublesome for writers. almost all of the scenes i've read on this site involving those three read a little corny and cliche.
i actually liked most of this. dialogue is tough to write--esp in the superhero genre--but the rest of the prose was pretty engaging.
superman seems to be fairly intimately attuned and connected to kryptonian culture, though...i mean, considering his upbringing...
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Post by brigante133 on Jan 20, 2006 1:21:29 GMT -5
OOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH the bus scene in action... didnt read AoS....
read aos, the last one and it makes sense. we played with a character theredhood. just check it out...
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Post by rowdyrjp on May 15, 2006 11:42:24 GMT -5
New to the site and working my way thru the catalogue of back issues....
Great, exciting way to start. I was impressed with the bang on characterizations of Year 1 type Clark, Lois, Perry and Lex.
I can't wait to read the next part.
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Post by ekcentrichippo on Aug 8, 2006 16:56:18 GMT -5
Best bit was the ending! Freaking fantastic cliff hanger, and it left me staring at the screen saying: His WHAT?!I agree whole-heartedly (SP?) house. I knew something like that would happen, but not in that way! Excellent work! |
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Post by aicarlos on Aug 8, 2006 19:19:59 GMT -5
its been said but
wow the ending was the best!
Car
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Post by Admin on Aug 11, 2006 22:17:45 GMT -5
Thanks, guys!
Taking me back to the good ol' days! I really wanted to kick this title off with a bang--- Glad you liked it!
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