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Post by markymark261 on Jun 23, 2010 15:09:53 GMT -5
Please let us know what you think!
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Post by ryokowerx on Jul 17, 2010 10:21:31 GMT -5
Okay. I'm (very) late in replying to this but I'm behind on my reading so I'm going to take care of this now.
"It's raining Ken"
I really really shouldn't be reading while I'm at work on a public desk but I nearly lost it with that line.
Somehow, Mark, you've managed to incorporate oddball jokes with a serious story and handled it masterfully. The various spy cliches (especially the line about the teddy bears) with Urania was a nice touch too.
I'm a little disappointed that I'm the only person to leave feedback but I do look forward to reading issue #3, Mark!
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Post by markymark261 on Jul 18, 2010 11:23:12 GMT -5
Thanks for commenting, James. It's much appreciated. Sadly, that's the end of the spy cliches for now, and maybe of Urania herself (how can she survive? is this the least suspenseful cliffhanger ever?), but the oddball jokes will no doubt be returning next issue, if only because I now feel challenged to make you laugh out loud at your public desk.
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