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Post by dragonbat on Sept 18, 2007 18:36:54 GMT -5
Tell us what you think! (And remember: you can vote in the polls, too!)
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Post by lissilambe on Sept 20, 2007 1:12:19 GMT -5
Not bad. A good strong effort at building an interesting mystery and tension, and the ending was well done, a classic "hero in peril" position, and the question about Jake's fate. Tiffany's interesting for a character, and I did like the exchange the bar with Bill over the can of ginger ale.
Take care
Don
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Post by arcalian on Sept 21, 2007 21:20:55 GMT -5
Get him out of there Nightwing, get him out of there!!!
The mother was a nice touch.
Is Sloan starting to suspect Dick?!?
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Post by batkid on Sept 21, 2007 23:32:55 GMT -5
Thanks, Don! I like playing around with Tiff... she's an interesting character to write! Ellen added the final touches to the ginger ale scene after my computer died (I'm happy to report that this is a NEW computer, much better than the previous dumb box o' bolts!!!)... thanks, Ellen! Haha, arcalian, the mother was another fun character to write... along with Bill. I had no clue that this month's issue of Nightwing even had a cover until I logged on DC2! To my surprise Ramon had come up with this amazing cover that I totally wasn't expecting! Thanks, Ramon!!!!  |
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Post by starlord on Sept 22, 2007 1:47:31 GMT -5
I really like the cast of characters that you have created in this story. Each issue draws me in even more and the character of Tiffany and Sloane are very well done.
This was a very good issue, and what I've come to expect from batkid. The story is building nicely and I love cliff-hanger endings, and this was a very good one.
Excellent cover as well!
Now for some light teasing: You're getting money from the Coke Company for those placement ads, aren't you? Be honest. If so, Ollie may just start drinking a lot of Pepsi if I can get a hold of the company. ;D
Seriously though, terrific job, and as always, you keep me wanting to read more.
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Post by batkid on Sept 23, 2007 12:33:00 GMT -5
Thanks, Brian!
Haha, Ellen got at me for putting Pepsi in once, but when it comes time to write, I can never remember.... Zesti.....Zesti..... Zesti.... (that IS it....... isn't it?!?!)
Thanks again!
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