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Post by HoM on Dec 2, 2009 20:34:30 GMT -5
Whoar! Please tell us what you thought of this issue, the penultimate part of The Return!
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Post by Mr Clown on Dec 3, 2009 15:47:16 GMT -5
Very nice work. The transitions between the events going on everywhere had been handled very nicely. I was surprised at how much I liked Dick and Jason's interaction, the dialog they had going on was entertaining. Ditto for Talia and Babs.
One problem I do have to comment on, is that once again some of the villains are being brought down rather... Easily would be the best phrasing I think. Although I have to admit, it was pretty hilarious as to what happened with Drakon.
The climax, I think everyone saw coming, but extremely nice work bringing it into play.
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Post by HoM on Dec 3, 2009 19:45:47 GMT -5
Very nice work. The transitions between the events going on everywhere had been handled very nicely. I was surprised at how much I liked Dick and Jason's interaction, the dialog they had going on was entertaining. Ditto for Talia and Babs. Imari once again handled scenes outside of her comfort zone with a finesse and flair that took me by surprise. I've been working with her the past few months on this event, and there's something else we're working on too, and it's just amazing to see how talented and creative she is. Her handle of Jason and Dick was brilliant, and I wouldn't mind seeing her write more of their interactions... but with one part of this event left to come... that might not be possible in the future... eh? Eh? EH?! One problem I do have to comment on, is that once again some of the villains are being brought down rather... Easily would be the best phrasing I think. Although I have to admit, it was pretty hilarious as to what happened with Drakon. Drakon was me, and I had to do it. It was a neat little scene to write, and I know it was abrupt, but... yeah. Sometimes these things are. The thing is, and I've said this before, is that these villains-- Flesh-Monger, Gun Moll, The Prince of Lies and Milo Vesuvius-- play a role in Phase Three of the evolution of the DC2 Bat mythos. Their rise to power is a back drop, but their continuing presence will be felt throughout the Bat-books-- and another title which you can check solicits for if you're wanting to-- throughout 2010. The climax, I think everyone saw coming, but extremely nice work bringing it into play. Cheers, Mike!! |
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Post by batkid on Dec 4, 2009 11:26:20 GMT -5
Very nice work. The transitions between the events going on everywhere had been handled very nicely. I was surprised at how much I liked Dick and Jason's interaction, the dialog they had going on was entertaining. Ditto for Talia and Babs. One problem I do have to comment on, is that once again some of the villains are being brought down rather... Easily would be the best phrasing I think. Although I have to admit, it was pretty hilarious as to what happened with Drakon. The climax, I think everyone saw coming, but extremely nice work bringing it into play. Dick and Jason work well together. Talia and Babs' team-up had more tension, creating an interesting scenario when they had to work together. Charlie's idea of how to take care of Drakon. I liked it, myself.  Thanks for reading! |
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Post by batkid on Dec 4, 2009 11:32:45 GMT -5
Very nice work. The transitions between the events going on everywhere had been handled very nicely. I was surprised at how much I liked Dick and Jason's interaction, the dialog they had going on was entertaining. Ditto for Talia and Babs. Imari once again handled scenes outside of her comfort zone with a finesse and flair that took me by surprise. I've been working with her the past few months on this event, and there's something else we're working on too, and it's just amazing to see how talented and creative she is. Her handle of Jason and Dick was brilliant, and I wouldn't mind seeing her write more of their interactions... but with one part of this event left to come... that might not be possible in the future... eh? Eh? EH?! Haha, thanks, Charlie... it's been amazing writing with you-- you're fun to work with! The climax, I think everyone saw coming, but extremely nice work bringing it into play. Cheers, Mike!![/quote] |
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