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Post by Admin on Jan 17, 2006 21:34:52 GMT -5
Let us know what yoy think!
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Post by deadshot042 on Jan 17, 2006 22:01:28 GMT -5
This was absolutely hilarious! I really enjoyed all of the characteriazation and thought this was a great way to kick off, what should be, a great comic. The best moment of this issue was when Oberon picked up the phone, talked to the guard and explained everything to Powers. That was funny!
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Post by brigante133 on Jan 18, 2006 1:54:44 GMT -5
Thanks for the kind words, every time we make a lettercol, deadshot is the first to post... eerie. Now to what I was gonna say: Welcome to the first Powers Inc. letter ‘column’, which I have chosen to title:[shadow=blue,left,300] Powers Inc. Letter Column! [/shadow] I know, I know, its brilliant! Anyhow, because I am writing something that may or may not be a quarterly, I have decided to write a lettercol. “Why” You ask? Well, I will tell you why, because I have an inborn need to explain my actions for that rubbish you may, or may not, have read. You see, Powers Inc. isn’t your typical DC2 piece of fan fiction. Well, It might be but that is entirely beside the point. No, Powers (which I will affectionately call it from here on out because I am too lazy to type “Inc.” every time) is very different because unlike the others, it is written by ME. That’s saying a lot because I am extremely lazy and while I may have the time to doodle out those little covers every week, I loathe the keyboard… loathe it entirely. In fact, when I was in grade school I nearly flunked typing class because I couldn’t type the average WPM (to my defense, I went to a grade school with over-caffinated typing prodigies who will most likely ALL grow up to be either stenographers or secretaries to very important people) And that is just the least of my troubles… I uh… am… okay so its really not. But more importantly than my ineptitude I believe is how this concept came to be. You see when I first starting posting here back in August (I believe) I had just started school and was really bored. Really. I needed something to fill my time and when I started talking to these great group of people, it dawned on me, I could write one of these things. So I pitched an idea to Charlie (I always pitch my ideas to Charlie even though all he ever says is, “Uh huh”) about a Deadman story. This was gonna be my first story to introduce myself to all you readers out there, but then, just like the idea to write the story, it dawned on me, “I can’t write this.” Even I got the idea approved and all half way through what I thought would be the first issue I was flustered and at a loss of words. That’s right true believers, ME at a loss of words! I couldn’t think of a damn thing! From there I sent a PM to David explaining why it wouldn’t work yet and how I am a total failure and I believe I included an apology for wasting his time with my nonsense. I told him I couldn’t write serious at all at that point in time and that I would get back to him when I was more ‘Into it” the cover was done and everything see? So one day, on a lonely walk home from community college (I really am setting the world on fire o’er here ) I was thinking about the Seven Soldiers of Victory project Charlie had done and the Manhunter bio I had read in my handy DC encyclopedia. I read about a cool team he was in called Power Company. The concept intrigued me, “A superhero team that worked like a business?” The possibilities for mockery were endless! So naturally I went out and bought every issue like Susan did when she discovered the magic of Jonah Hex or Charlie and the Question…. Not really. I never read a damn issue. BUT, that didn’t stop me from proposing it to Chuck. Like I do quite a bit, I started off with, “I have an idea.” I could hear him sigh from across the states and the Atlantic Ocean, but nevertheless I asked him what he thought about a Power Company Title in the DC2 Universe. Despite his skepticism, he listened to the idea ridiculous as it may be. I wanted a mix between a comic I had never read and a comic that I read very little of. The other comic?. Justice League International. To my surprise, he said something along the lines of, “Brilliant! I am so jealous I am not as creative and innovative as you! Please, Please, Please, let me co-write it, its bound to be great!” Something along those lines. So with a “co-writer” and idea, I got to work thinking about it and told him the team had to consist of guys that looked cool and gals that looked hot. Seriously, that was the only restriction I had on the team, you can ask ANYONE that I talked to about it at that time. Also, I wanted the majority of the team to be D-Listers. So with that (And to be honest, I had already had a rough roster that looks very much like the one you see today) he and I sent names back and forth of whom we wanted. I said something like: Power Girl, Steel, Booster Gold, Blue Beetle, Human Bomb (who I also rallied for back when he told me the list of the seven soldiers) Plastic Man, and Prysm. I know now that some of those names seem big, but at the time they weren’t Beetle had been shot but Power Girl very existence did not put the DCU into a disarray at that time. To Charlie’s credit, he thought up a lot of those guys I never would have, guys like Airwave, Vapor, and a slew of others that were good but didn’t make my cut (Although he did propose Blue Devil which did, in fact, create that line about the members only working if they could be a McDonald’s happy meal toy) The main quality I told him to use when we chose the team was superficiality and I think it worked quite well. Oberon had always been a favorite character of mine and so I added him in (I used the codename Smee in word in case D said no) as Josiah Powers’ “Dwight Schrute” or “Josephine” (from the 1959 classic Some Like it Hot of course) or “Randal Graves” or “Algernon” or “Guildenstern”… Maybe at this point I should talk a little about my influences as a writer. I have only been collecting comics on a regular basis since November of 2004 back when Rebirth started up. Until than I loved comics but meh, wasn’t into them as much as other things, after Rebirth, Green Lantern became a regular buy for me and eventually so did Green Lantern Corps and this wacky Crisis thing we are in the middle of. No, back then I read the occasional TPB from my library and an issue from my comic shop when I had money but my real literary influences come from plays. Back in my junior year of high school, I would buy tons from the small used bookstore and read like one a day. “A View From a Bridge,” “Death of a Salesman,” “Rosencrantz and Guildenstern Are Dead,” “Mourning Becomes Elektra,” “Desire Under the Elms,” “Inherit The Wind,” and a few more that I can’t remember the names of. But I got a grasp of dialogue from those… I think. Besides plays it is very likely you will see the influence of film in my stories. But let's not get carried away with that, the point is that comics may inspire this series but it is maybe more influenced by everything else around me. I mean, with only three regular titles and TPB’s it is less likely I am gonna go read a comic before I put in a movie. I am just plain lazy. Which brings me to my second love, cinema. If its been anyone medium that has inspired my more than comics its that and to keep from droning on, I will keep the list short of influences and favorites. Anything written or directed by Kevin Smith, Quentin Tarantino, John Waters, Orson Welles, Rob Zombie (he’s going places man) or Robert Rodriguez. Finally I want to thank a few people here that helped Powers Inc. come to be. First off, is my “co-writer” Charlie who didn’t so much co write this as he did say hey, you should probably write that soon, its due next month. Brandon, the Obi Wan Kenobi to my uh… R2D2, who does an unthinkable amount of work on these darn covers every week. Brandon that is, not R2. Ellen for actually nodding her wise head to my absurd ideas. And a general (but still extremely grateful/sincere) thanks to Scott, Doc, John, Apprentice, Roy, Susan, Jim, Brian and oh! that pesky editor who I realize decided to wisely remove his name from this title for putting up with my nonsense. (was the mispelling of you here intentional? if not play it off like it was) That said, I hope you enjoy the issue. Really, I do. Well, you COULD hate it and use this column to write nasty hateful things about me too. BUT, if you do end up liking it, good for you, you have impeccable taste! (now that we got THAT out of the way, I promise that next lettercol will be full of witty anecdotes and one liners. Which reminds me, what do YOU, the DC2 readers, think this title should be? Monthly? Quarterly? Yearly? Please let us know.) Ramon Villalobos OH! Also stay tune in next issue when not only will the team be in costume, but they will also be in the same room!
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Post by HoM on Jan 18, 2006 3:45:11 GMT -5
Lord, I'm sorry I allowed this to happen. He's from a different country and all... I couldn't stop him, could I?
Wait... What? I'm posting on... His letter column?
Ah.
Heh.
this is really a fantastic book, no matter what is said! it seems that January is the month of the SPECIALS, with WWQ, TQQ and now Powers Inc joining the ranks of our special series section! It was a great read! The dialogue was sharp, the story interesting, even though it seemed to lag a bit, but when it was being drawn along, that was because there was one hell of a punch line to back it up! An awesome true debut by Ramon Villalobos, and I can't wait to read more!
And to set something straight, I was there for Ramon to bounce ideas off. I helped make the preview more coherent...
AND THE EDITOR WAS DAAAAAVE!
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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Post by Romans Empire on Jan 18, 2006 6:03:54 GMT -5
Wow. This was a great read. It takes a rare talent to write great dialogue that is this funny. But I think it needs to be said that the humor was only the icing on the cake. The true impact of this story was the characters. I don't know if Hal Jordan has a cousin in the regular DC universe or not, but I don't care. You took this guy and made him all your own. You made this guy real. I found myself so engrossed with Harry Jordan, that I felt sorry for him but only to the point that I cared what happened to him. I was rooting for him when I just met him. I love a character driven story and with each introduction I wanted more. I loved the interaction between Steel and Booster. Was it a little over the top? Sure. But you played Booster as a pompous ass perfectly. The inner dialogue as Power Girl slowly justified why she should join Powers Inc. was spot on and very believable. You slowly lead the reader to the same point she was getting to at the same time. The exchange between Audrey and her mom was spot on. Which was creepy because I don't think you are a mother or a teenage girl, right Ramon? I cannot wait for this group to finely come together. The whole next issue could have them locked in an office and talk the whole time and I would love it. I know you will cringe when I say this but I only know two other writers that could pull that off, Mark Waid and Brian Bendis. Bash all you want but that is an incredible compliment to you. I know the "dark" stories you have planned will be elsewhere but I want to see more of this book! I will be the first to vote for an ongoing monthly but I bet I won't be the last! Thanks Ramon!
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Post by Admin on Jan 18, 2006 7:40:22 GMT -5
AND THE EDITOR WAS DAAAAAVE! BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! What?!? I don't know what you're talking about... Heh, heh... My favorite scene is where Airwave is frantically running around his apartment trying to check the time, and all his clocks are either not working or not set--- only to realize he has a watch on! And I would like to commend Ramon for remarkable restraint regarding Power Girl: only one boob joke! Wait, what? What about the cover?!?
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Post by starlord on Jan 18, 2006 12:16:51 GMT -5
Fantastic! One of the funnest reads I've had in ages. You've got a great grasp on the characters. I haven't laughed out loud so much in a long time. Thanks for a great read!
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Post by brigante133 on Jan 19, 2006 9:25:24 GMT -5
Thanks for the kind words everyone. now... charlie: thanks pal! but... made it more more coherent? what? when? i coulda swore all you did was add in "Josiah said" and "oberon replied"? no? must be my mistake. John: Aiwave is my favorite character from Powers too, not to write because that is Booster or Oberon, but as a person, he is definitely my favorite. more on that next issue... and dude, trust me the dark stories will still be funny, just... morbid i guess. Dave: That whole clock thing i liked when i typed it, but since I have forgotten, and since i don't prewrite or anything, i almost forgot that! thanks. OH and I couldn't BELIEVE chuck outed you like that, old gaurd my arse... Brian: thanks for saying that, I hoped it was funny as opposed to annoying which i could totally understand. Its funny that you say I have a great grasp of the characters because when i wrote this i had (and still haven't) read a comic with Prysm, Vapor, Looker, Airwave (I started pre IC3), Steel, or even Power Girl really save a minor appearance in a minor title. And the rest I think i just made up... but thanks nonetheless. ;D Ramon.
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Post by deadshot042 on Jan 19, 2006 23:19:46 GMT -5
I liked your introduction. I'm a big fan of plays too, especially Inherit the Wind. I hope this comes out as a monthly. Once again, great work!
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Post by cheshire on Jan 20, 2006 16:59:06 GMT -5
It was a nice read, the story line isn't my perfect cup of tea BUT I did enjoy it, never the less. The cover was...uh unique I guess but in general I enjoyed this issue. Like it was said before, the dialogue was VERY good! I will indeed be reading this series in the time to come! Good work ! Oh and was it just me or did the writing keep changing from past tense to future tense? I dunno, maybe I just can't read.
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Post by brigante133 on Jan 20, 2006 18:19:12 GMT -5
no, its not just you chesire. i noticed it. its the most obvious of my flaws but i'm workin on it. as for the story... err... there wasn't one i guess, so far it was all of the group s personality except for a few that will be revealed later. Thanks on the compliment on the dialogue, if i had a strong point, that i think would be it. As for the cover... its really the most iconic symbol on the team. did you know what it was prior to reading the issue? the alternative was a close up of booster golds crotch so i thought this would be more suitable.
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Post by deadshot042 on Jan 20, 2006 19:53:52 GMT -5
Are you saving that cover for issue 2? If so, please warn me so I can avert my eyes.
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Post by cheshire on Jan 20, 2006 20:27:16 GMT -5
I see! Well on that note, I like the current cover!
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Post by Susan Hillwig on Jan 22, 2006 13:56:49 GMT -5
The cover brings to mind an old line from Punky Brewster: "Henry, I'm getting boobs!" I didn't think I'd like this, but I'm making a point to read everybody's first issue, so here I go, no idea what to expect, and hey, I like it! A lot of laugh-out-loud lines ("smiling like Stevie Wonder at a basketball game" and "I eat breakfast out of [Superman's] head" comes to mind) and good character -- admittedly, I only know maybe four of these guys previously, but I like the way they come off. The Airwave stuff (and yep, he's Hal's cousin, Roman) reminded me of the old "Tick" cartoon -- for now and forever, Airwave will sound like Arthur to me. The back-and-forth pacing with Power Girl, where you intertwined saving folk with her thoughts on Powers's offer, could have been clumsy or confusing, but it was PERFECT! The only complaint is the dialogue between Powers and Oberon: yes, some of it's funny, but mostly it feels drawn-out and (don't hit me!) boring, like you're filling space. Lastly, thank you for calling Airwave "Harry" and not "Hal". I think I'd pointed out a while back that calling him Hal as well could lead to confusion in our "prose-only" format, and it looks like you thought the same. Keep up the good work, and whether this book is monthly, quarterly, yearly, or centennially, I'll be back for more!
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Post by brigante133 on Jan 22, 2006 16:52:52 GMT -5
"I didn't think I'd like this" aw thanks! "admittedly, I only know maybe four of these guys previously" so do I! we have something in common! ;D " reminded me of the old "Tick" cartoon " I watched that as a kid, but this guy was written to be more like... i dunno clarence in true romance. it doesnt sound like him anymore, because i made him nervous, but i just saw that movie again before i wrote that part. "Lastly, thank you for calling Airwave "Harry" and not "Hal"." I just thought it sounded cooler.
thanks for the compliments susan! true the oberon stuff kind of draaags, but I dunno, its easy to write. Filler? i dunno, because i didnt altogether "struggle" to finish this thing(i edited out something like 4-5 pages) but i know it can drag. the funny thing is, is that i thought more people would have issues with the booster scenes so i made an effort to shorten those and the bus scene with airwave and vapor was rushed as hell but i haven't really heard much on that. but i wouldnt expect much in the next issue of oberon and powers, the issue will be handed off to the heroes in the next issue.
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Post by brigante133 on Feb 16, 2006 19:41:03 GMT -5
POWERS, INC. #2 UPDATE
umm... its kinda not done, i think i have like... a page and a half? but what I do know is that it is going bimonthly and is out the Wednesday after next. soo... get ready!
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Post by HoM on Feb 17, 2006 4:45:14 GMT -5
Am looking forward!
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Post by markymark261 on Feb 20, 2006 14:04:43 GMT -5
Loved the cover.
Although I liked the story, and really liked your cast of characters, I didn't find it that funny (no doubt a sense of humour failure on my part, also the propensity of typos was a distraction). The Suzanne Vega Tom's Diner reference made we wonder whether you'd included Looker just so that she could say "My name is Looker, I live on the second floor" in some future chapter.
Considering the title, I'm wondering whether Brother Power will be turning up or Dumb Bunny's mom Princess Power will be coming out of retirement.
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Post by HoM on Feb 20, 2006 14:06:17 GMT -5
(Ramon! he's spoiled the plot for "Crisis of Infinite Powers", the Power Inc annual!)
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Post by Brandon on Mar 5, 2006 0:07:33 GMT -5
Lotsa fun, Ramon and thanks for the kind words in the lettercol intro. I enjoyed the humor and felt it played out well. There were some typos there with sequences instead of sequins, Huston instead of Houston, and some other stuff, but nothing too distracting. Humor is certainly the hardest thing to write and you used a combo of devices and techniques here and everything worked very well. I also liked some of the references and descriptions. The imagery was brought about in unconventional ways and with some post-modernist heavy pop culturing but again, very nicely done. Fun, unconventional, and definately worth the read. Can't wait for the new one!
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Post by brigante133 on Mar 6, 2006 21:03:31 GMT -5
aw i missed that when you first posted it. thanks. the new one should be out tommorrow. lets see how that goes ;D how can something be post modern? head explodes.
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Post by Lantern Lad on Apr 19, 2006 14:34:48 GMT -5
It was pointed out to me, rather unceremoniously, that I had yet to comment on this issue of Powers Inc. Something that will apparently make me the butt of an upcoming joke in Powers #3... So I guess I should post a comment about #1. So here goes:
It was swell. It was a hoot. It was laugh-out-loud, uproariously funny (too much?). You've got the never ending (and mostly unintentional) comedy of Booster... the pathetic Harold (the other Hal) Jordan, Oberon! The original Mr. Miracle!
And the cover! THE COVER! Just WOW! Boobs! What else do you need? Hell, put a B on either side of them and the cover spells out it's perfection! Well... of course you'd need an 'S' in there as well, but that's OK. They're boobs... you gotta love 'em.
Now I'll hold off comments on #2 until I'm guaranteed that a joke is made about me in issue #4.
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Post by HoM on Apr 19, 2006 14:47:28 GMT -5
*ding ding ding*
yes. yes there will be.
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Post by brigante133 on Apr 19, 2006 16:15:47 GMT -5
haha, yeah not about YOU personally. if you read number two you might understand... but you dont... because you hate us...
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Post by Lantern Lad on Apr 19, 2006 16:46:41 GMT -5
I know the joke isn't about me specifically, it made me laugh out loud when I read the a preview from Charlie. And I 'hate' no one... I will read #2 as soon as I find a spare moment, which will hopefully be this week.
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Post by brigante133 on Apr 19, 2006 17:27:06 GMT -5
i am kidding scott. you know that. you know that, right?
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Post by Lantern Lad on Apr 19, 2006 17:59:17 GMT -5
*the sound of crickets chirping*
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Post by brigante133 on May 18, 2006 8:54:08 GMT -5
cool.
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Post by artteach on Oct 1, 2006 1:45:21 GMT -5
finally madce my way over to Powers, Inc.
Solid writing here. Strongest parts are Powergirl (it had a nice flow of thoughts) and Airwave. Weakest part was intro of Looker to Booster and Steel.
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