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Post by Admin on Nov 20, 2009 18:17:31 GMT -5
Please let us know what you think!
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Susan Hillwig
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I'm not crazy, my mother had me tested.
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Post by Susan Hillwig on Nov 30, 2009 1:27:51 GMT -5
As always, I read 2 issues back-to-back (seems to work well for me), and I'm seeing a marked improvement in your writing. Not that what you wrote before was bad, but your storytelling methods are getting tighter, for sure. I also foresee a meeting with the JSA on the horizon (perhaps co-written with David?), and I can't wiat for that. And I like the implication of Terra's Bible quote, which I looked up the moment I was finished with the issue: Mark 3:7 - "But Jesus withdrew himself with his disciples to the sea: and a great multitude from Galilee folllowed him, and from Judea..."Well done, sir. Very well done.
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