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Post by arcalian on Aug 1, 2013 23:32:54 GMT -5
We want your feeedback!
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Post by Fantômas on Aug 15, 2013 9:35:28 GMT -5
Short issue, but you continue to world build in a way that's actually pretty exciting. Captain Marvel's reimagining is promising (and riddled with yet more Star Wars influence, no?) and I genuinely think your writing has improved over these eight issues.
Keep it up!
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Hush10
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Post by Hush10 on Aug 15, 2013 14:28:41 GMT -5
Short issue, but you continue to world build in a way that's actually pretty exciting. Captain Marvel's reimagining is promising (and riddled with yet more Star Wars influence, no?) and I genuinely think your writing has improved over these eight issues. Keep it up! Thanks Fantomas. I have had some influences from Star Wars on my characters, although I am not so proud of the entire series so far. I've been experimenting with my writing as the series goes on but I can't get the right tone of it. So in other words this is just a title for me to do experiments with. But I have got a few ideas for seperate series for Elesworlds, that would translate into a full on Digital Comic. My friend is writing a series that I'll be illustrating, and I'm very excited about it. I won't be talking about THAT right now but I think it's a very promising storline that sets up the dark knight's own universe (oops, just dropped a hint). I also have a few ideas for the new Marvel site we have (if people are still working on that) that would also translate into digital comics. I think my writing is more fit for actual comics because it's hard for me to explain images in my stories such as battles. So if I draw things out it would be much easier for me to tell a story. I don't want to drag this on so I'll just stop while I'm ahead. Thanks for the comment! |
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Post by Fantômas on Aug 15, 2013 19:09:16 GMT -5
Feel free to drag it on, DC2 could always use more conversation and discussion.
You'll have to give us all a heads up when that digital comic idea comes about, and I can see why your writing style might fit a comic format better. You clearly have plenty of ideas and visuals you want to get across, but sometimes the prose narrative can be lacking (apologies, as I said you are improving).
Yeah, writing for DC2 is pretty much my writing experiment time. My current bugbear is keeping a plot concise - I just can't tell a compact story, and it's irking me because I know how cool a short story can be when its neatly brief and has a satisfying conclusion.
But I'll get there, one of these issues.
Again, let us know when that digital comic gets done. I'll certainly be a reader.
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