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Post by Admin on Nov 20, 2014 17:06:12 GMT -5
Please let us know what you think!
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Post by mockingbird on Dec 12, 2014 10:43:40 GMT -5
Well, that opening scene was exceptionally creepy! Nicely done.
Just as I was starting to wonder if you'd explained how Zach got his voice back, there was your explanation.
I'm intrigued by the way you did the big fight scene. I think it's quite brilliant, actually, if you weren't up for writing an entire fight out. (And trust me - superheroes or not, fight scenes are HARD) I'm not sure if it would have been better by writing the entire thing out. But I think you did a good job through Eddie's eyes of putting the big moments together and moving the action forward.
Well done, and looking forward to the next one!
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Post by hushicho on Dec 17, 2014 12:38:01 GMT -5
Thank you! There are plenty of opportunities to do more detailed fights (like the one in issue 2), but as this was more of a personal story of Zach and Eddie -- especially Eddie -- I thought it would be good that way. I'm glad you agree and I'm grateful to hear from you.
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Post by HoM on Feb 17, 2015 13:37:50 GMT -5
Yay, Roulette! One of my favourite villainous characters, and one I always enjoy seeing make appearances. Great for a certain type of story, and when you think about how she goes about her business, she''s actually one of the more terrifying enemies of the JSA. I enjoyed the ties to the larger DC2niverse with King Chimera, and the more we see of Zee and John the happier I'll be. You've got a great feel for these characters, and you've got me hooked now, so keep up the good work!
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Post by hushicho on Feb 25, 2015 14:30:47 GMT -5
Thanks very much! Sorry it took a bit for me to get back to you, but weather has been nuts here. I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the series, and I'm especially happy you like John and Zatanna being a part of it too. They're going to play a large part in the storyline starting in #4!
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Post by HoM on Feb 26, 2015 11:12:31 GMT -5
Thanks very much! Sorry it took a bit for me to get back to you, but weather has been nuts here. I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the series, and I'm especially happy you like John and Zatanna being a part of it too. They're going to play a large part in the storyline starting in #4! I've been holding off on reading the fourth issue because I blasted through the first three in the same afternoon, so I didn't want to run out of content prematurely! I'll head over to that issue ASAP, after I finish wrapping up a few DC2 bits and pieces I've currently got on my plate. Looking forward to more John and Zee!
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