From that super scary and ultra creepy cold open, I was hooked. I've never watched or read Batman Beyond but that scene at Old Arkham just worked.
I wanted to start the story off in a way that sets up the criminal scene of Gotham and also mainline some of the narrative choices I made back in the day with my writing on
Batman and
Detective Comics. I did a bit of it in
Justice League #8 (a
TEN YEARS LATER tie-in) with, I guess, a very grandiose and operatic view of the city. Metropolis never clicked with me on a 'character'-level, but I think Gotham is always going to be the constant 'non-speaking' member of the supporting cast in this mythos, so I'm glad everything worked for you there. It's not just this gothic throwback, but a very ancient, creaking haunted house of a place, and I hope to address that elsewhere on the site moving forward (see my previous post about a potential new book--
The Batman). The only thing from
Batman Beyond was the Jokerz as a concept. There's also something I picked up from Snyder's
Batman run, but that's for the eagle-eyed (if, of course, I was as subtle as I intended to be).
And we see the consequences in the very next scene, with an almost (but not quite) maudlin Bruce contemplating his current situation. His thoughts of Alfred are what, somewhat against my own expectations, gave me my feelings. IMO, if there can be said to be a Bat-Family, then I think Alfred is the glue in that. He raised Bruce, and was probably as much a father to Dick as Bruce was (and thus all the other proteges, Jason, Tim and Damien), and his absence has impact with Bruce's musings.
This scene was written in two parts, the first being the one-sided dialogue between Bruce and the past, and then the sound of leather wings that came later. I had to throw that in there as a reference to my favourite episode of
Batman: The Animated Series. Kirk Langstrom's amazing transformation and the tail-end of his speech "It's in me... Batman..." still haunts me to this day.
On a macro-scale,
Batman: The Final Knight, is written for you, David, and those of the fandom who view Batman as a lone soldier in a war against crime. I'm consciously trying not to use the extended family, even if it's a concept I have no problem with using.
Gotham Knights: The Last Laugh is going to be embracing the concept whole hog-- who made it ten years later? Who's part of the family now? Who's still standing? This is the last Bruce Wayne story. This is about him, and the effects this life had on him. I wholeheartedly agree that Alfred is a paternal-figure to Bruce, and maybe Dick too, but Tim and Damien saw Bruce as a father in my own canon. Jason? I think Jason got a bad go of it in the DC2, 'coming first' as he did. Their relationship was short and ended badly, and we may just see that addressed all these years later...
The surprise revelation of Silver St Cloud in Bruce's life cuts in at the perfect moment. Good to see Bruce achieving a measure of happiness here, and they have a great chemistry. Though I gotta say, I'm a little disappointed it was her (of all people) he settled on. What happened to Selina Kyle (my preference)? Or Vicki Vale? Or Talia?
Batman: Strange Apparations was the first Batman-related trade I ever picked up and I fell in love with the stories and the character of Silver St Cloud. I'm glad the chemistry clicks, and I realised that as I was moving through the issue I was writing more and more 'human' scenes than Bat-centric, and I really got a kick out of that. I will rectify that next issue, of course as Batman races back to Gotham to save it from the full fury of the Unnamed.
But with regards to 'settling' on his wife, I'd like to think it was more of her accepting that he's not who the man he plays out in the wider world. I never saw Vicki Vale as a player in the game, and Selina never came into it during the decision making process. Talia's ultimate fate will be revealed next issue, and it shapes the events of this story massively.
That's not to say, of course, that Selina and Bruce didn't have a go at it over the decade we 'last saw them'. I know I'm building toward a relationship in
Justice League right now (I've discussed the cover of the big reveal issue with Jamie and it's going to be awesome) that won't make it into this era, but that's not going to stop them trying, or for me from writing it. That issue hits in November and it's going to be a corker.
I must say, I'd like to hear your thought process on this particular Kevin Smithian direction. The fact that you made the execrable "Dee-Dee" thing DC2 canon... I may never forgive you, Charlie!
The St Clouds have a long history in the DC2, with Argent in
Danger Trail and some other plans that are being ruminated about for the present day. Silver is my favourite of Bruce's potential suitors across eighty odd years, and I wanted to find someone who was apart from 'the world' that Bruce-as-the-Bat exists in, but is understanding and loving. From
Strange Apparations to now, I think she's the best bet.
Oh man, bloody 'Dee-Dee'. It was so ridiculous and I couldn't help myself. That was the only thing I considered cutting and I just had to throw it out there. It's so ridiculous! But I wanted to establish that Silver is very playful-- for example her interactions with Chase-- and has a vibrant and dirty sense of humour. I imagine Bruce cringing when she calls him that, and she likes that she can get under that stoic façade of his. Couples, hey!
The bit with Harvey Dent felt gratuitous to me. It was the least interesting part to me, and doesn't SEEM to be connected with the story of THE FINAL KNIGHT, but you are a storyteller who tends to spring very cool surprises on the reader, so I'm sure you're setting up something cool.
The interactions with Dent and Gordon were
really important to me. I wanted to show that Bruce Wayne has made a difference, that he's trying in every aspect of his life to make efforts to make his home a better place. It's not just about throwing crooks into jail and madmen into madhouses. It's about healing and building, and the two scenes with him visiting 'old friends' was of the utmost import to me. I also love Two-Face (I was re-reading
Batman Annual #14 from 1990 with what I believe is the seminal Two-Face origin story when I was writing this issue) and wanted to show that one of the most tragic characters in the Bat-mythos can be helped, and Bruce isn't just resting during the day and preparing for the night. He's putting money into schemes and programs that will help make Gotham a much better place. That said, Gotham is also a very fickle city and always fills voids where they form, be it when the Batman dies, or if a villain is rehabilitated. Things get worse, always, until they finally get better.
Plus, where are the stakes for Bruce in this final story if Gotham isn't finally getting better?
Adult Damien and his Man-Bat League are a nice synthesis of the Morrison concepts. The scene in the Lazarus Pyramid was tense and fraught with a lot of unsaid stuff--- there is a hell of a backstory here. What happened to Talia?!? Making Damien blind is a great touch. I hope there is a reckoning between father and son (and grandfather!) next issue.
Next issue.
R'as as Batman's nemesis feels right. There was some foreshadowing that makes me believe this might not end well for the Dark Knight Detective, not an altogether unfounded suspicion in "the last Batman" story.
Obviously we're revisiting Joker in
Gotham Knights: The Last Laugh, but I wanted to approach two sides of the coin with Batman's nemeses with these final stories.
The Joker is a force of nature, you can really only gird yourself and hope for the best. Ra's is scheming and devious in a different way, and if this story is about Batman and how that mantle will always be there, how there'll always be a protector of Gotham City in this new age (of superheroes that started nearly twenty years ago, in-universe), then what better way to do that than to juxtapose this eternal force of good against an immortal league of evil? I've started writing 2,500 words into the second issue and it's... absolutely crazy. Very little present-day scenes at the moment, but a lot of contextualising and building of a foundation that I hope will pay off in a big way.
Magnificent first entry into 10YL, Charlie! Looking forward to seeing how this wraps up.
Thanks, David. Always great to hear from you!