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Post by Admin on Feb 21, 2006 19:33:49 GMT -5
Let us know what you think!
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Post by HoM on Feb 22, 2006 12:40:34 GMT -5
When asked to write part of this book, I asked for the beginning and I was blown away, and that's the main thing that attracted me to helping out! A great read! Really enjoyed it! (the bits I didn't write, that is!)
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Post by Apprentice on Feb 22, 2006 13:51:04 GMT -5
I only wrote 25%, and what Charlie wrote was simply amazing...good job!
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Post by markymark261 on Feb 22, 2006 14:09:35 GMT -5
Great story, really enjoyed it (although having all the Titans captured and Nightwing turning up to save them reminded me a bit too much of the previous story). Liked the cliffhangers.
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Post by Lantern Lad on Feb 22, 2006 21:34:46 GMT -5
Another stellar issue! Although I will say that it was one of the most brutal issues we've had on our site yet. Never before have I seen so many broken noses, teeth & ozzing blood.
Fun!
I liked Nightwing's ability to thwart Slades every move before Slade even knew what move to make. I really don't have anything negative to say at all... Keep 'em coming like this & you'll have a reader for life!
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Post by starlord on Feb 22, 2006 22:14:55 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this. There's a reason why Nightwing is as good as he is, and you both showed it perfectly! Can't wait to see where that ending leads. Keep up the great work.
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Post by HoM on Feb 23, 2006 12:07:59 GMT -5
Another stellar issue! Although I will say that it was one of the most brutal issues we've had on our site yet. Never before have I seen so many broken noses, teeth & ozzing blood. Fun! I liked Nightwing's ability to thwart Slades every move before Slade even knew what move to make. I really don't have anything negative to say at all... Keep 'em coming like this & you'll have a reader for life! Well, they're weren't going to come out of this untouched, so I thought what the hell... Let's see 'em HURT. Hee hee. Even though Bruce isn't the paranoid bastard he is in the DCU, he'd still teach Dick to take away an enemies weapons before he can use 'em. Thanks for the compliments! |
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Post by chaltab on Feb 24, 2006 23:54:45 GMT -5
The story itself was nice, but the constant tense changes were annoying and word choice could have been better. I noticed a lot of words were repeated at innoportune times, like "Terror"...
Sometimes it wasn't clear in the Slade/Nightwing fight if the pronouns were reffering to Deathstroke or Dick.
Man, that was brutal!
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Post by hope on Feb 25, 2006 21:37:32 GMT -5
You guys are so violent! Do you always have to go so gory. Sometimes fights where guys can't even touch each other they're so even sounds better then they were beating on each other so much they should be dead. Yikes.
Love the cliffhanger though.
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Post by chris on Feb 26, 2006 15:27:04 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this and I thought the fights came off incredibly. Action like this is really hard to get across without visuals. Fights like these had to be gory. They are fighting a guy who kills people for a living. Also there are several plot threads to be picked up on here. I can't wait to find out how Deathstroke knows Batman.
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Post by deadshot042 on Mar 2, 2006 20:26:26 GMT -5
This made me think of what if Tarantino directed a Titans movie. The action was awesome, but I hope this much blood in a fight won't become the norm. I can understand it from Deathstroke and a few others, but not all the time.
Really great job though guys.
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Post by Roy Harper on Mar 9, 2006 8:14:37 GMT -5
you have a very wolfman effected view of the team. It's lots of fun  |
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Post by captainbouncy on Mar 24, 2006 23:25:35 GMT -5
Some good ideas. But I have been dissapointed in the characterization of multiple characters in all 4 issues. Yes, this is a different DCU, yet the fact Raven talks enough to rival a high school drama queen is supremely depressing. Wheres her mystery? Her panache for the unexplained? her reasonings are way too lengthy and way to obnoxious. Wally's motives need to be explained as he seems to be portrayed in a much more ruthless manner.
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Post by Apprentice on Mar 25, 2006 5:19:59 GMT -5
Wally's motives? Read issue #3.
As for Raven, I'm sorry you haven't been liking her so far, but she and Wally will get the spotlight later on in my run and there's gonna be some mystery there, so you may enjoy that. I hope you like #5.
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