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Post by darthsylly on Mar 20, 2007 5:40:55 GMT -5
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Post by HoM on Mar 21, 2007 2:29:19 GMT -5
Ooo er. Nice ploy on Luthor's part!
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Post by Crow on Mar 21, 2007 19:56:59 GMT -5
My favorite panels? Seeing Bats eating lunch. I don't think I've ever seen Bats eating, let alone eating fruits. Awesome.
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Post by David on Mar 22, 2007 10:29:16 GMT -5
Interesting story, some real nice art and composition...!
And yet, I have to say, my favorite scene was Batman eating lunch, as well!
Don't get me wrong, I thought the Superman/Lex Luthor stuff was great, but Batman sucking soda through a straw was priceless!
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Post by darthsylly on Mar 24, 2007 20:08:23 GMT -5
thanks for the kind words, glad you all liked it  work on the next part is under way ... and the artwork so far is looking better! |
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Post by Admin on Mar 26, 2007 4:32:59 GMT -5
I enjoyed it, although, maybe my eyesight's going but the dark background made the first lines of the captions impossible for me to read on the first three pages.
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Post by darthsylly on Mar 26, 2007 6:57:37 GMT -5
Glad you liked it! Yeh some people have said the same about the purple text boxes at the start... I think it's to do with different screen settings. I have this professionally printed and it's fine and on my screen it's fine (I have a Sony X-Black on my laptop) but my on my Father's screen it's difficult to make out.
I'll avoid the purple/any dark-ish colours next time!
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Post by HoM on Apr 1, 2007 7:27:04 GMT -5
Happy Birthday to our resident Sith Lord!
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Post by starlord on Apr 1, 2007 8:42:53 GMT -5
Happy Birthday Darth! And here's to many more happy and healthy one's in the future!  |
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Post by arcalian on Apr 1, 2007 10:17:29 GMT -5
Your birthday is impressive...most impressive.
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Post by darthsylly on Apr 1, 2007 10:59:19 GMT -5
thanks guys! lol |
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Post by dragonbat on Apr 16, 2007 13:45:28 GMT -5
I liked it! One thing you might want to watch... on this side of the Atlantic, we say "truck", not "lorry". I nitpick, I nitpick. Apart from that, really good stuff!
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Post by chaltab on Apr 22, 2007 14:01:14 GMT -5
Very nice job. I love the scene with Batman just drinking from a soda can. So very un-Batman like, and yet you know he's had to have done it every now and then. Interesting plot so far, and your characterization is pretty good. The voices for all the main characters sound right. I can hear Kevin Conroy saying Batman's lines, so no worries there. Keep up the good work. |
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Post by arcalian on May 24, 2007 20:06:31 GMT -5
Finally got around to reading this. But when I did, some of the pages would no longer load, and some only halfway. That said, what I read was excellent and exceedingly clever. So Lex ain't gonna kill Supes.......he's just gonna utterly discredit him to make room for his own superteam! Which is just fine...until some kind of cosmic threat arrives.....which I'm sure it will.
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Post by darthsylly on Jun 8, 2007 15:36:48 GMT -5
hey arcalian, I just did a forced refresh and the images loaded fine for me so maybe imageshack was having a bad day when you checked it out? I'll probably change the host to deviantart soonish. Exceedinly clever you say? Great! Part two is in progress.... thanks for the comments |
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