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Post by Admin on Jun 13, 2006 20:45:47 GMT -5
Let us know what you think!
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Post by Zoom on Jun 13, 2006 21:41:17 GMT -5
Ggggrahh... Flash... (White liquid comes out from my mouth)
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Post by Romans Empire on Jun 13, 2006 23:36:40 GMT -5
That was an epic ending to an epic tale. Mark Waid is the only other writer I know who can pull off time travel this well in a Flash tale! I must say, I wasn't sure where the storyline was going when it first began but it all came together in the end. Of everything you write here Charlie, this is one tale that really showcases your talents. The big pay off is when the reader realizes that the writer had a plan from the beginning and is rewarded with a satisfying ending! Bravo! As for the covers: Those are the coolest Flash covers I have ever seen Borize! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!  |
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Post by >>Riz! on Jun 14, 2006 0:51:35 GMT -5
 Thank you very very very much |
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Post by HoM on Jun 14, 2006 1:55:59 GMT -5
Well, to summarise... There's The Flash... And he's... Uh... Time travel... And... Blue Beetle, Uncle Sam and Booster Gold... Yeah, they do something... And... Things. Yup. *nods* Enjoy!
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Post by Lantern Lad on Jun 14, 2006 2:43:36 GMT -5
I have to say, Chuck you knocked my effing socks off with this conclusion!
I loved it! Although, there is something to be said about a 2 part 'conclusion'... that in itself is confusing, yet intriguing enough to capture the attention!
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Post by chris on Jun 14, 2006 5:31:31 GMT -5
Bravo!!!!!!
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Post by HoM on Jun 14, 2006 7:43:19 GMT -5
I got it up until Jay was in the stream and is the Black Flash Edward? Nope  |
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Post by HoM on Jun 14, 2006 7:52:17 GMT -5
I'm taking that as a compliment, Chris! Thanks! Hope you liked the Blue Beetle mention! “Ted was a technical whiz, he still is in this time, I assume? The Beetle? Blue Beetle?”
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Post by Zoom on Jun 14, 2006 14:47:28 GMT -5
Now that the shock has passed, I'll write. I loved this issue, best issue of the Flash. Had to read it twice to fully understand it, but still it was great. And the covers are fantastic.
Who is the Black Flash? The speedster version of the black dog, the banshee, the grim?
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Post by HoM on Jun 14, 2006 14:49:15 GMT -5
All of the above, wrapped up in the shell of a Speedster who has become one with the Speed Force and used to cure it of 'infection'.
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Post by Dr Dread on Jun 14, 2006 15:53:56 GMT -5
Good job Charlie, this is how a wrap up should be written. Leaving the readers wanting more!
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Post by chris on Jun 14, 2006 16:55:00 GMT -5
I'm taking that as a compliment, Chris! Thanks! Hope you liked the Blue Beetle mention! “Ted was a technical whiz, he still is in this time, I assume? The Beetle? Blue Beetle?”
“Never heard of him.”The way it should be Technically they woud have thought he meant Dan Garret. |
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Post by Zoom on Jun 14, 2006 18:50:08 GMT -5
BUT, Dan Garret wasn't a technical wiz. So, they would have thought it was ANOTHER blue beetle. I think, guess, whatever...
EDIT: Also, we have to count the important point they said Ted.
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Post by starlord on Jun 14, 2006 21:35:03 GMT -5
Spectacular finish, Charlie! I'm not a huge fan of time travel stories, but this one is definately the exception. Everything seemed to fall right into place. Well plotted and well told. Kudos, my friend!
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Post by HoM on Jun 15, 2006 13:12:57 GMT -5
Thanks for reading it guys, but if you want to read some more finely plotted mojo, pick up Suicide Squad, biweekly in the upcoming months till IXE and one of the greatest books on this site!
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Post by Zoom on Jun 16, 2006 22:50:41 GMT -5
I read Flash's number nine thing in the calendar:
A malevolant figure appears in Titans Tower, confronting Wally West AKA Kid Flash, and then vanishes, leaving the young speedster with a foreboding prophecy that comes true almost as suddenly as he appeared! With Kid Flash taken over by some mysterious entity, who you gonna' call?
I'm gonna guess... The Ghostbusters??
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Post by Apprentice on Jun 17, 2006 7:24:36 GMT -5
Wow, this was an amazing end to a completely brilliant tale! Dunno how you made the time travel stuff so easy to understand (well, compared to other time travel-ish tales ), but I found it really enjoyable and it was the perfect conclusion. And, Borize, those are the best covers on the site, IMO, and to get them to stand above the rest of the amazing covers, even slightly, is a BIG achievement. Exalt for both of you. |
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Post by Romans Empire on Jun 17, 2006 9:01:56 GMT -5
Thanks for reading it guys, but if you want to read some more finely plotted mojo, pick up Suicide Squad, biweekly in the upcoming months till IXE and one of the greatest books on this site! Suicide what? I thought that was our secret! Thanks Charlie! You continue to set 'em up and I will continue to....wait, did you say BI-WEEKLY? I better get back to writing! |
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Post by >>Riz! on Jun 17, 2006 15:12:00 GMT -5
And, Borize, those are the best covers on the site, IMO, and to get them to stand above the rest of the amazing covers, even slightly, is a BIG achievement. Exalt for both of you. *blush* Thank you. I feel so honored to work with you people, cause you're all so talented. And when you say something like this it is really a compliment I don't deserve. But I like to hear it ;D |
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Post by antalos on Aug 22, 2006 12:08:13 GMT -5
Hi there... I'm new in this forum, and I haven't read the story yet, but the covers for this number looks great... congrat's to the illustrator cartoonist.... good job
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Post by >>Riz! on Aug 22, 2006 13:15:33 GMT -5
Thank you very much But now you should read the story. |
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Post by HoM on Aug 22, 2006 14:01:39 GMT -5
Yes. Yes you should! |
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