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Post by dragonbat on Aug 14, 2007 19:20:49 GMT -5
Tell us what you think!
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Post by starlord on Aug 18, 2007 9:50:40 GMT -5
This was a good issue. As always, the characters were solid, and you've fleshed them out enough so that it gives me an emotional investment in Jake's fate.
It did feel like the middle of a story, just a bit, but it still held my attention the whole time.
Nice job!
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Post by arcalian on Aug 19, 2007 9:49:46 GMT -5
Dick is juggling his identities relatively well....so far.
He seems, wisely, not to be getting involved with Rachel.
I have no idea where you're going with this.
And Dragonbat: You know, I've a few customers who deserve to be in that jar in your sig file....
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Post by dragonbat on Aug 19, 2007 14:32:35 GMT -5
I'm really enjoying the storyline, Batkid! You made me jump a bit right at the time NW tackled Tiff!
And Arcalian, IRL I'm a call-centre supervisor. My own jar is pretty full...
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Post by batkid on Aug 19, 2007 20:06:16 GMT -5
This was a good issue. As always, the characters were solid, and you've fleshed them out enough so that it gives me an emotional investment in Jake's fate. It did feel like the middle of a story, just a bit, but it still held my attention the whole time. Nice job! Thanks, Brian! I'm glad to see you back! Jake wandered into one story, and now he won't leave...  A lot of this and the last NW story was came while on a plane ride, whilst staring out at cloud after cloud after cloud.... My brothers tell me that I suddenly grabbed my carry-on, searching for the notebook. Finding it, I shoved my soda onto their tray and was consumed with writing until interrupted by cheerful flight attendants. Of course by that time my one brother's lap was filled with bits and pieces of my eraser and crumpled up paper. *shrug* Glad you like it, 'cause at that point, he sure didn't. |
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Post by batkid on Aug 19, 2007 20:10:27 GMT -5
Dick is juggling his identities relatively well....so far. He seems, wisely, not to be getting involved with Rachel. I have no idea where you're going with this. And Dragonbat: You know, I've a few customers who deserve to be in that jar in your sig file.... Dick's gotta be careful with Rachel, especially now that Tiffany knows so much. He's also gotta find Jake, and take care of Sloan. He's gotta heck of a lot on his plate. I think he's doing OK.  And muahahaa, we shall see....... |
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Post by batkid on Aug 19, 2007 20:13:08 GMT -5
I'm really enjoying the storyline, Batkid! You made me jump a bit right at the time NW tackled Tiff! And Arcalian, IRL I'm a call-centre supervisor. My own jar is pretty full... Thanks! There is ABSOLUTELY no way I coulda done it, any of 'em, without you! |
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Post by arcalian on Aug 19, 2007 20:28:47 GMT -5
And Arcalian, IRL I'm a call-centre supervisor. My own jar is pretty full... Well that explains it, I also work in a call center. Heh. |
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