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Post by Romans Empire on Mar 20, 2008 14:40:40 GMT -5
Please let us know what you think and don't forget to rate the issue!
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Post by starlord on Mar 22, 2008 3:20:06 GMT -5
Part 3 has really cranked things up several notches. The battle scene was tense, to say the least. Although Booster and Beetle's appearance was a bit jarring, it didn't distract all that much, and I found issue to be exemplerary.
It's not easy writing a story with a cast of thousands, but Jay has pulled it off well. Making sure everyone gets at least a moment in the sun.
Cheshire felt just a tad off to me, not as ruthless as I would come to expect, but she's also growing in character, and in Jay's hands, I'm sure she will continue to grow into a the nasty girl we've all come to know and love.
As for the ending... wonderful twist! Of course, I'm going to read the final chapter anyway, but even if I wasn't editing it, there would be no way that I would miss this!
Excellent job to all, and I thought the cover was amazing. Nice to see Catman and Cheshire together. I always kind of thought they would make a nice couple. LOL!
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Post by >>Riz! on Mar 22, 2008 16:34:05 GMT -5
very good issue
there was a lot of action so well coordinated, no character felt useless. Very well done.
the Blue and Gold scene was nicely involved into the main story.
Good job.
I'll be back for the final chapter of this arc!
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Post by UltimateDC on Mar 23, 2008 21:04:50 GMT -5
Good stuffs. Things are kicking up several notches (What with Cheshire stealing an OMAC and whatnot). Terra's interested in the Teen Titans (I did not see that one coming) and the Squad/Titans are coming together.
With Catman, Cheshire, Knockout and Parademon all in the same book, I expected Scandal Savage to pop up somewhere.
Looking forward to the end of this arc.
-UDC
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Post by arcalian on Mar 23, 2008 21:15:11 GMT -5
Thanks, Riz and UDC!
The Booster Gold/Beetle thing gave me an opportunity to do something I wanted to do already anyway, but in a smarter, more interesting way.
From Terra's perspective, she wants OFF the Squad. Very badly. Doesn't want to stay in Markovia, either. Plus, she finds Beast Boy amusing and....interesting, heheh. Also, when Geo-Force brought her to America in the first place, both of them thought a superhero team was where she would end up, to keep an eye on her and clean up her act (from Brion's perspective) and keep her safe from some of the people she used to associate with (from Tara's perspective). Squad was less than ideal, and then the whole thing with Killer Frost happened, you may remember. Terra wants out, and the Titans are not only a better option, they're pretty much the only one she's got.
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Post by starlord on Mar 23, 2008 21:24:38 GMT -5
you're welcome.   |
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Post by arcalian on Mar 23, 2008 21:41:26 GMT -5
you're welcome. I'm not worthy! I'm not worthy! *grovels and scrapes* |
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Post by starlord on Mar 23, 2008 21:43:54 GMT -5
you're welcome. I'm not worthy! I'm not worthy! *grovels and scrapes* LOL! You sir, are worthy and wonderful! Just keep writing and I'll keep reading. |
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Post by michealdark on Mar 25, 2008 0:00:16 GMT -5
Oh wow, the action really went up this time!
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Post by lissilambe on Apr 11, 2008 18:26:21 GMT -5
Excellent rising action, good solid characterization by and large, even the cameo by Booster and Beetle was handled well I felt. The revelations of the storyline slipped out in a solid, entertaining fashion, nothing seemed forced or implausible, and I'm loving how Tara is scheming to escape the Squad, where she feels out of place. All in all, a great entry in your four-parter.
I did feel Cheshire came off a bit lacking in ruthlessness and ability, but I did enjoy some of her internal musings, especially wrapped around SPeedy and Catman, so that made up for that too.
Solid part three and I look forward to the conclusion.
Take care
Don
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