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Post by starlord on Nov 27, 2007 19:20:30 GMT -5
Let us know what you think!
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Post by UltimateDC on Nov 29, 2007 1:00:04 GMT -5
Nice work. Now we have the finite threat of an alien mind controller, which is good, because the whole "What does the space rock do?" thing was kinda getting old, but now the Titans know what they're dealing with and have to figure out how to deal with it.
And Wally...well that's a weird twist. But I know it's gonna be interesting.
-UDC
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Post by starlord on Dec 2, 2007 0:58:52 GMT -5
I rarely comment publicly on books that I edit, but I have to say that when Jay took over as writer for the Titans, I was holding my breath. Mark's shoe's were pretty damn big, and although I know Jay is an awesome writer, as he has shown us in his ongoing Elseworlds title - Titans: Resistance (which you all should be reading since he has built such a mind blowing universe of his own), still, Jay was following a mind blowing run from our own EIC.
With this issue, he has more than proved that he not only can keep up the high standards that the last writer's gave us, but bring us some wonderfully new and fresh idea's. I'm very honored to be editing this book and being a part of Jay's creative process. The Teen Titans have a special place in my heart, and this writer is keeping that special place very warm. Kudos!
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Post by lissilambe on Dec 3, 2007 11:24:45 GMT -5
An interesting issue. A solid ratcheting up of the menace involved, and a challenge for the Titans. It's not a strong story, but it's not a bad one, and shows great promise in the talent of the writer. Each of the Titans seemed to come across as individuals, and that was cool. There was a lot of telling, rather than showing, or a lot of both, running throughout the issue, but as Jay continues to produce issues, I"m sure he'll get a better handle on how and when to utilize each technique.
Some of the implications behind this story are interesting. The whole thing with Dagon and his "low brain frequency" thing was...weird but intriguing. What exactly this rock is, and what it's desires are get more revealed, but I'm not sure if it's made more clear. But that might be a process of the story, so I'll wait and comment more on the clarity of the story when the next part comes out.
All in all, a good entry, and I agree with the editor, the title seems to be in good hands.
Take care
Don
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Post by Romans Empire on Dec 4, 2007 8:56:37 GMT -5
Great second issue Jay! I was hoping to discover what or who was the true menace this issue but the big reveal didn't happen!  But there was plenty going on to keep the story moving. There were parts that weren't as strong as others but the good outweighed the bad. Some of the dialogue was a bit stiff but I think some of it was suppose to be? Other then that your strengths and style worked well here. I loved the "So what's the frequency, Kenneth?" line! One of my favorite REM songs from their best album ever! Also, the cliffhanger blew me away! Nice to see that the cover (Another RV masterpiece BTW) reflected a major scene in the story. I eagerly want to know how this unique and interesting tale is going to end! Of course with two issues of build up all the pressure falls on the final issue to deliver but I have faith that it will! |
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Post by arcalian on Dec 4, 2007 14:43:08 GMT -5
Um.....thanks for the feedback John....but...I did reveal the big enemy; the alien consciousness. The segment from it's POV stated what it is and what it wants pretty clearly. If you're looking for some costumed villain to stick his head in to this whole affair, you're going to be dissapointed. :/ The "delivery" is in how they beat it.
Beast Boy's witty lines came to me a lot easier than I thought, which is good as he will be important later, for reasons obvious to anybody who knows me as a writer.
Thanks for your endorsement, Starlord, and thanks for the positive feedback, Ultimate DC; as for Lissilambe, going by his critiques here and elswhere, it's pretty obvious I'm never going to live up to his expectations of my "improvement", so I will simply thank him for finding as many positives as he did and leave it at that.
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Post by lissilambe on Dec 4, 2007 15:01:12 GMT -5
Well, considering that I said it was a good story, that I pointed out the ratcheting up of the tension and action was solid (thus meaning it was good), and that the characters all came across as well-written (thus the "each is clearly individual") and made comments on some of the swerves of the story (the reveal about Dagon's brain activity, and the use of a different sort of threat), and wrapping it up by saying that I agree withe editor that the title's in good hands, I would hope you'd cosider that a positive review.
Did I think that there might be room for improvement? of course. Why else are we giving comments and critiques, if not to help each other grow as writers? I could spout off the same single "This was the greatest issue since...last issue!" but of what use would that be to our efforts to grow stronger as writers? I'm sorry that I seem to have bothered you on this point. From now one, I'll make it a point to offer no commentary, or just another "this was a great issue" commentary. I have no desire to offend anyone.
Again...good story. Glad to see the title in good hands.
Take care
Don
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