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Post by artteach on Oct 25, 2006 1:21:37 GMT -5
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Post by HoM on Oct 25, 2006 4:05:34 GMT -5
The artwork was some of your best Steve, and the only niggly thing I could complain about was that your spelling was off a few times, but other than that... Cool story, I'll read it next time!
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Post by artteach on Oct 25, 2006 7:09:26 GMT -5
Thanks, I'll run over the spelling again.
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Post by chris on Oct 25, 2006 7:12:14 GMT -5
Ver nice, sir. Great job. The fight with Batman and the cos looked great. The story is interesting too and I'll be awaiting the next part.
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Post by batarang on Oct 26, 2006 0:35:02 GMT -5
Great job for the first (and hopefully not the last) book of its kind on the site. A picture is really worth a thousand words, and told the story vividly. It must have been a ton of work, but the results are certainly worth it.
One question: is that Gordon calling Batman "Bruce"? Or is he talking to himself?
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Post by artteach on Oct 26, 2006 7:45:57 GMT -5
Yes, Gordon is calling him Bruce. Being Elseworlds I wanted the fact that Jim knows out pretty early. It will effect the story later.
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Post by Dr Dread on Oct 26, 2006 20:33:10 GMT -5
Good work Artteach.
I know illustrating a full issue is hard work, and I can see a lot of effort in this. It's a good start, and I definitely will catch the followup story!
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