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Post by Admin on Dec 31, 2009 15:01:00 GMT -5
Please let us know what you think!
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Post by mockingbird on Feb 9, 2010 21:22:05 GMT -5
Excellent suspenseful ending let's see if I can remember all the things I was thinking when I read... I definitely like your characterization, plenty of times I was sucked right into the conversations. You're good at slipping in little bits of humor - "we'll call that plan B". Dinah was really great and very believable, in fact, all the Outsiders are very realistically pissed off about what's going on and that's great, it adds a good dimension to the story. Ramsey's become an asshole, hasn't he? XD This is heartbreaking for Kate, isn't it? I can't wait to see how it turns out, because it would be so sad to see them completely alienated from each other by the end of the story. A very good issue - when I have the time I'm going to have to go back to the start and work on getting into this series =D
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