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Post by arcalian on Jan 13, 2011 20:04:36 GMT -5
Let us know what you think!
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Post by tamaranorbust on Jan 13, 2011 23:36:54 GMT -5
The flippng back and forth between past and present creates a fairly disturbing mood - makes you understand why she is so edgy. I'm looking forward to seeing where this will go with the DP and hope you deepen Gar's protrayal. There are some typos and choppy bits, but the imagery is vivid as always.
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