Letters to Batman Issue 5

Thanks everyone. This is my first story I wrote for anyone but myself. Like all things I learn from my mistakes. My next one will be longer.

I like to thank Ellen Fleischer for fine tuning my story and DrDread for the cool cover. David Charlton for everything else and my wife Stephanie. She is the best.

Thanks Again,

Mitch

Agreed! I liked the shortness of it. I really know nothing about this particular villain, but after reading that there was a forensic investigator named Humphrey Dumpler... I thought to myself, 'well, that one's solved!'

I don't know why, but I didn't quite like the story. I understand that maybe you were trying to bring out a bit of story to one of Arkham Asylum's "lifers" but the manner in which you did didn't grab me. An enhanced exo-skeleton? It's been done... It was a solid little story, but the manner in which you told it did not grab me. You have a vivid style that allowed me to stick with the story, and the shortness of it was effective (short, sharp, sticks with ya'). I'll read whatever else you write, because you have some cool ideas... One final thing... Those little editor notes would have been better if they were at the end of the story, because they disrupted the flow of narrative, and were abrupt to say the least.