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Post by David on Dec 8, 2009 18:41:00 GMT -5
This one has a doozy of a cliffhanger ending! Please let us know what you think!
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Post by HoM on Dec 11, 2009 8:50:31 GMT -5
Things are picking up in the Blue Beetle corner of the DC2niverse, and I was thoroughly impressed by this issue. Apart from a few errors with punctuation, this was a smooth and concise read that is head and shoulders above your earlier work, Chris. I was blown away by how tightly plotted and delivered it was, and even though the Beck reveal was an obvious point from midway through their scene (see what I did there?) it was still a gut-wrenching reveal (I did have a problem with the weird sudden attention to detail when it came to her wrists, but hey, it worked out in the end) and a good open to the issue. I just though... "bam, then the opening credits," and I always love the feeling.
The Jaime/Ted banter was awesome, and it looks like those kids are going to become an important factor in this title... and maybe others? Who knows. The end cliffhanger was brilliant, and I think the only real flaw was the Nuclear Family... there's no description there, just names and a blurb after the fact. But other than that, good work, Chris. A vast improvement over your previous work.
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Post by starlord on Dec 15, 2009 21:45:46 GMT -5
WOW, what an ending! I am on the edge of my seat after this issue.
Dialogue was spot on, and I especially loved that final moment when Ted was getting himself ready. Taking one more bite of his sandwhich was a great touch!
Can't wait til the conclusion of this next month. Great job, Chris!
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Post by chris on Dec 16, 2009 4:14:22 GMT -5
Thanks for commenting fellas! I'm having fun writing this and the conclusion will be double sized.
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