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Post by HoM on May 28, 2008 12:42:26 GMT -5
Tell us what you thought.
Thanks.
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Post by Mr Clown on May 29, 2008 14:10:13 GMT -5
I was gonna post earlier but didn't get around to it until now unfortunately. Let me just say, great work. Creepy, and funny at some points, with a great cliffhanger at the end.
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Post by lissilambe on May 29, 2008 15:42:00 GMT -5
I loved it when I got this draft in. This was a tight, fun little tale of scares and action, and each of the people in the story sparkled with their own little tweaks and twitches. I loved Lucy, I think you managed to capture her longing for childhood and nostalgia so perfectly. I almost found myself missing my time with her in her childhood town. Nicely done. And the ending...a nice subtle nod to the continuing tale.
Good work, Charlie!
Take care
Don
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Post by HoM on May 31, 2008 7:57:55 GMT -5
I was gonna post earlier but didn't get around to it until now unfortunately. Let me just say, great work. Creepy, and funny at some points, with a great cliffhanger at the end. Thank you, Mike! |
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Post by HoM on May 31, 2008 7:58:25 GMT -5
I loved it when I got this draft in. This was a tight, fun little tale of scares and action, and each of the people in the story sparkled with their own little tweaks and twitches. I loved Lucy, I think you managed to capture her longing for childhood and nostalgia so perfectly. I almost found myself missing my time with her in her childhood town. Nicely done. And the ending...a nice subtle nod to the continuing tale. Good work, Charlie! Take care Don Thanks for taking the time, Don! |
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Post by Mr Clown on May 31, 2008 10:54:01 GMT -5
I was gonna post earlier but didn't get around to it until now unfortunately. Let me just say, great work. Creepy, and funny at some points, with a great cliffhanger at the end. Thank you, Mike! What no exalt? Cheapskate  Now go release next issue of ZH!!! |
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Post by HoM on May 31, 2008 11:05:13 GMT -5
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Post by starlord on May 31, 2008 14:03:21 GMT -5
This was an EXCELLENT issue with a capital EXCELLENT. I've become very intrigued with what is going on with Occult, and this story was just plain freaky fun.
It had a very "Supernatural" feel to it, and I loved that. This story reminded me of all those nights when I was a young man, reading the best of Stephen King and Peter Saul.
There were moments that gave some major goosebumps and the story itself was exceptionally tight. Honestly, I think supernatural, bizzare, and creepy is perfect for you, Charlie. You've got exceptional talent for it. And this is the stuff that you do that wows the hell out of me.
The cover was an acceptional piece of work that blended perfectly well with the story. Ramon and Charlie have always had a great rapport and this proves it beyond the shadow of a doubt.
5 stars to all.
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Post by HoM on Jun 1, 2008 9:49:43 GMT -5
This was an EXCELLENT issue with a capital EXCELLENT. I've become very intrigued with what is going on with Occult, and this story was just plain freaky fun. If it wasn't for Don, this story wouldn't be here. He's a really great editor to work with, and due to his crippling put downs, I wrote this issue But seriously, he helped make this issue what it is. Big kudos to him. It had a very "Supernatural" feel to it, and I loved that. This story reminded me of all those nights when I was a young man, reading the best of Stephen King and Peter Saul. Supernatural! One of my favourite television shows of all time! Exactly the vibe I was going for  There were moments that gave some major goosebumps and the story itself was exceptionally tight. At last! Honestly, I think supernatural, bizzare, and creepy is perfect for you, Charlie. You've got exceptional talent for it. And this is the stuff that you do that wows the hell out of me. You really are too kind  The cover was an acceptional piece of work that blended perfectly well with the story. Ramon and Charlie have always had a great rapport and this proves it beyond the shadow of a doubt. 5 stars to all. I love that guy. |
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