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Post by Admin on Feb 26, 2008 14:04:55 GMT -5
Please let us know what you think!
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Post by arcalian on Mar 2, 2008 23:51:22 GMT -5
The story was good; a chaotic fight scene with multiple factions, and a bit of villain expostiion that made sense where it was placed.
One one thing takes what would've been the fifth star away; that editorial bit about "Back to back" being left in the text.
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Post by Admin on Mar 3, 2008 2:44:21 GMT -5
Oops. Thanks for pointing that out, Jay. It's now been corrected.
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Post by Crow on Mar 3, 2008 7:13:46 GMT -5
oh my god! thank you very much!
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