Apprentice
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Post by Apprentice on Mar 20, 2006 16:33:03 GMT -5
You deleted my post! Just 'cause it's ture...  |
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Post by HoM on Mar 20, 2006 16:39:36 GMT -5
Heh. Keep it up man, keep it up...  |
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Post by Brandon on Mar 23, 2006 8:53:32 GMT -5
This was a very cool story. I had very different ideas of how he would disarm the bomb, but none of them were as cool as yours. The ending was even better, though it took me a minute to understand what had happened. Anyways, good job, This is one of the best issues on DC2 that I have read so far. Thanks Imp! Your comment on the climax not being clear enough is a very valid point. I tried to make it work right be was a little worried it might not be obvious at first. Then I realized that I forgot a piece of dialogue! It should help and is one of the first bits I thought of for this story so I feel like a dork for forgetting it. I added it but so you don't have to go looking for it (in the story it's just before Flash confronts Spectro at the very end): Flash Fact: The Earth rotates 25,000 miles in a single day or at a speed of just over 1000 miles per hour. But for the next few seconds, I'm going to change that.How could I forget the Flash Fact? Sheesh. Thanks for pointing it out, sir! Only two weeks till the new Flash issue is out!  |
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Post by Brandon on Mar 23, 2006 8:55:01 GMT -5
And since everyone else is pimping their books, if you enjoyed this story be sure to check out my ongoing stories over in Aquaman! ;D
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Post by dragonbat on Apr 16, 2007 12:23:12 GMT -5
Brandon, I'm reading all the Flash stories now to try to get a handle on the character. Thank-you for making it so enjoyable! I loved this!
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