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Post by HoM on Sept 30, 2008 16:49:13 GMT -5
Please tell us what you thought of this issue!
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Post by starlord on Oct 1, 2008 17:13:10 GMT -5
I thought this issue was very, very powerful. Some very wonderfuly worded prose in this, along with a sentence that I may actually use some where down the road myself (non fanfiction related). Apollo is sort of creeping me out. I'm getting this icky feeling from him, but not sure why. The whole mother Earth part (although I knew was coming) was done exceedingly well - and check out this months NO for a bit of that to have an effect on them as well: at least two of them. Now! With tongue planted firmly in cheek, I must say that if you add up all the young women that Charlie has stabbed, shot, beat up, molested, or just plain brutalized in his time here, you could probably fill an oil tanker. Excellent job Charlie! Bravo!
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Post by HoM on Oct 2, 2008 18:36:21 GMT -5
I thought this issue was very, very powerful. Some very wonderfuly worded prose in this... God, I was struggling with this issue for weeks before sending it to Don this weekend (which is quite late for me, I try to get stuff in as early as possible), and thought it was wavering between overwrought and cliched. I'm so pleased it didn't fall short ...along with a sentence that I may actually use some where down the road myself (non fanfiction related). PM me what you're thinking, I'm intrigued and tres pleased to help.. Apollo is sort of creeping me out. I'm getting this icky feeling from him, but not sure why. Hmm, well, things aren't as clear cut as they seem up on Mt Olympus right now, sir. Things are only going to get worse... The whole mother Earth part (although I knew was coming) was done exceedingly well - and check out this months NO for a bit of that to have an effect on them as well: at least two of them. And check out November for something friggin' huge. I mean it. Now! With tongue planted firmly in cheek, I must say that if you add up all the young women that Charlie has stabbed, shot, beat up, molested, or just plain brutalized in his time here, you could probably fill an oil tanker. Though in the book you would expect me to stab, shoot, beat up, molest, or just plain brutalize girls, The Question: The Hub #1 subverted it by having the Mayor's husband being kept captive! Got to keep you guessing, sir! Excellent job Charlie! Bravo! Thanks so much!
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Post by zirron on Oct 6, 2008 20:08:24 GMT -5
Charlie,
As you continue your run... I can see the vision and direction you're taking my favourite character. I know it's hard to turn out story after story like you do, but really I like the direction it's going in. I won't try and compare you to anyone else, because your style is unique to all your own... which is a really good thing.
Apollo is well done in my opinion.. and I like how you handled the scene with Athena. I think you have plethora avenues to go with your story line.
Well done, man.
**** from me.
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Post by HoM on Oct 7, 2008 12:47:55 GMT -5
you continue your run... I can see the vision and direction you're taking my favourite character. I know it's hard to turn out story after story like you do, but really I like the direction it's going in. I won't try and compare you to anyone else, because your style is unique to all your own... which is a really good thing. Thanks dude, I really appreciate it. Wonder Woman has been a fun ride, and after ten issues, I'm stepping down with the next issue. There might be an annual down the line where something is tied up, but I think I've done what I intended to do with the book, and hopefully next issue will sum up everything I love about the character. Bondage. Wait! No! That was a joke! is well done in my opinion.. and I like how you handled the scene with Athena. I think you have plethora avenues to go with your story line. Cheers. That Athena thing leads into the next mega-sized issue. Also the Ares stuff from every single issue, the Apollo stuff, the New Themyscira stuff, the Heroes Museum... ... Wait, I didn't mean to say that, either!! Well done, man. **** from me. Awesome dude, thanks for taking the time.
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Post by lissilambe on Oct 27, 2008 9:35:07 GMT -5
Powerful, strongly thematic, a very well-done story that's bringing your threads together quite nicely. Great job, Charlie.
Take care Don
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