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Post by starlord on Jul 22, 2008 19:56:45 GMT -5
Please let us know what you think?
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Post by zirron on Jul 27, 2008 9:42:39 GMT -5
Hi Jay,
I wasn't too keen on this issue for some reason. I see what you were trying to do with it, but I felt kind of lost and jumbled around by the close of the issue. I think it's needing a little more revision though, in my opinion.... some of the dialogue seems forced a bit.
Anyway, this doesn't really sway me from reading the title... I just didn't like it very much.
*** from me.
I think Jina's cover is outstanding. She's one of my favourite artists. I hope she stays around for a long time.
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